Good stuff! You seem to be getting a lot more comfortable with him now, and you know your stun frames and the such.
Only things I'd point out:
1) The ongyoin derivative version of the Shoho Izuna nets slightly more damage than the standalone version.
2) 214P puts you at +2, making your mid only tie with Jann Lee's (both tieing at 18 damage as well). So while it can be viewed as a "safe" gap-closer, be aware that your offensive options from it are limited, especially sicne players will pick up on the move )being so slow) and begin intercepting it, especially with a keepout character like Jann Lee.
3) You can either a Shoho or the 33P4 as a guaranteed follow-up from the 214P sit-down stun. Some like the 66K follow-up for the potential mix-up, but the damage off of the first two options is great and doesn't improve all that much, even delving into a CB set-up from the 66K.
