Lol, So Many P's O_O! But we gotta start somewhere right? It pretty much shows what it's like to teach someone that has basically just picked up the game. I like the focus on "not mashing", and learning how to chain parts of a string. Obviously the "combo" is far from optimal, but other than that the only suggestion I'd make is like Jaimy said, to use H-cancels after each string (though I'm sure free cancels are coming in a later tutorial). I'm looking forward to future tutorial segments!
I like this. Finally an OFFICIAL tutorial. This was on my list in the "We can get there but..." Thread. We got streams as well. Now we need or would be nice to have a Tekken Crash type of thing.
Advice? Add low volume background music to make it feel more alive.
This video is quite helpful for newer players. The good thing about this video is that it teaches newer people not to mash and let them learn about delaying your movestrings. Even though the combo advice is not practical (almost all strikes are highs so there's a good chance you will get held somewhere in between), it teaches the newer players the basics of striking your opponent.
I also suggest using H-cancel to cancel your string immediately so you don't have to wait until the string's active frames end. On the other hand, that tactic is quite advanced so it may indeed be a good thing to start off with just waiting and delaying.
