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Kodachi

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Quick illustration of my La Murciélago (Bat) Costume
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Tyaren

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Quick illustration of my La Murciélago (Bat) Costume
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Beautiful! Love your costume design and your faces are always so stunning. For a little more effect, I'd push her breast slightly more up and make them rounder. There are two edges there, that personally throw me a little off of the otherwise great profile view.
 

Tyaren

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Felt like drawing Cam Cam <3
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As you didn't reply to my (and synce's) critique, I wonder, if you want to hear any. Even though the subject of my last critique was a bit dubious, it was meant in all honesty and no joke. ;)
I'd really like to give you critique here again. Just stop me, if you don't want any in the future, okay?
The face is stunning as always, but the body does not match that quality and nearly perfect rendering yet. It's obvious, you like to spend much more time painting beautiful portraits rather than full body pictures. (Now, don't deny that! XD)
In this example the body proportions are a bit off. The upper body is too small in volume and the shoulders are too narrow, Cammy's arms are too small especially her right fist. As a fighter, she doesn't project strength/power like that. Another tip I would like to give you (I also noticed that on your Nyotengu picture): Try to bring a little more dynamic into her body. Even though she is supposed to be standing straight, that doesn't mean it has to be this straight and stiff. Maybe a little more S-shape would do wonders?:

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(I quickly searched for an S-shape pic of a sporty woman. There are probably many better ones, also depicting stronger, more muscular woman, but you get what I mean. :)
 
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Kodachi

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I really rushed this one i plan on working on it a bit more. youre critiques are very helpful, im always open to improving my art skillz, i definitely notice a lot of stiffness in my figures.

What really bugs me are these icons i made for fsd, the composition isnt the best :/ i wish to re do them sometime.
:marierose::momiji::nyotengu:
 
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Tyaren

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I really rushed this one i plan on working on it a bit more. youre critiques are very helpful, im always open to improving my art skillz, i definitely notice a lot of stiffness in my figures.

What really bugs me are these icons i made for fsd, the composition isnt the best :/ i wish to re do them sometime.
:marierose::momiji::nyotengu:
I didn't know, these were yours! :D Show's how much and how fast you improved.
 

Kodachi

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random OC
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Just went with the flow with this she looks like an alien high school cheerleader, and kinda reminds me of Ulala
I'll call her Spacey Casey :3

also trying to redesign this Teen Titans character
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Argentus

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cool! I'd love to see them, which characters?
Some old one off characters I'm writing a fan comic about. Posted them here I think.

Marie Batroc
Daughter of Tarantula
Robin Vega
Jillian (of the) Neyaphem
Fire Knives and Saw Fist
Lunatik
Axon

And a few others


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Not happy with it. Going for a gymnast/cheerleader vibe but km gonna change the gloves and legs to armored versions. I'm making her a Sanji style runner and kicker as opposed to her Savate styled father. Revamping her as a Lollipop Chainsaw style "pure fun" character. Her partners design is wip as I'm switching her over to sultry biker leathers, but no final design yet.

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These two, Robin and Jillian, are a mutant Spiderman once saved and one of Azazels demons, the only one who wasn't shown being killed. Revamping them as kokonoe style cynical scientist leader (shes a metallurgist who can turn into any metal. How OP is that? Making her lazy to offset that). And Jillian from "death to angels" to living in fear of them after capture and imprisonment. Maybe name her Skycrawler to contrast with Nigjtcrawler.

Lunatik I'm going for a mix between his original Lobo design and his "in name only, random blonde dude" appearance when he died.

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I'm gonna keep the latter appearance but bring back the originals powers, and shoe a gaping Hell spawn maw from the shadows under his hair.

I'm reviving Fire Knives with a Wolverine healing factor and tethering her blades god of war style. Saw fist is going full robo to pull off cool chainsaw tricks like the weapon guy from Soul Eater.

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Phone is gibing me trouble so I can't link more.
 

Kodachi

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Some old one off characters I'm writing a fan comic about. Posted them here I think.

Marie Batroc
Daughter of Tarantula
Robin Vega
Jillian (of the) Neyaphem
Fire Knives and Saw Fist
Lunatik
Axon

And a few others


marie_batroc_redesign_by_degalon-d8z0jjp.jpg

Not happy with it. Going for a gymnast/cheerleader vibe but km gonna change the gloves and legs to armored versions. I'm making her a Sanji style runner and kicker as opposed to her Savate styled father. Revamping her as a Lollipop Chainsaw style "pure fun" character. Her partners design is wip as I'm switching her over to sultry biker leathers, but no final design yet.

marvel_fanart___jillian_and_robin_vega_by_degalon-d7j81u7.jpg


These two, Robin and Jillian, are a mutant Spiderman once saved and one of Azazels demons, the only one who wasn't shown being killed. Revamping them as kokonoe style cynical scientist leader (shes a metallurgist who can turn into any metal. How OP is that? Making her lazy to offset that). And Jillian from "death to angels" to living in fear of them after capture and imprisonment. Maybe name her Skycrawler to contrast with Nigjtcrawler.

Lunatik I'm going for a mix between his original Lobo design and his "in name only, random blonde dude" appearance when he died.

lunatikmerc1.jpg

87305-146984-lunatik.jpg


I'm gonna keep the latter appearance but bring back the originals powers, and shoe a gaping Hell spawn maw from the shadows under his hair.

I'm reviving Fire Knives with a Wolverine healing factor and tethering her blades god of war style. Saw fist is going full robo to pull off cool chainsaw tricks like the weapon guy from Soul Eater.

1371884-fire_knives_02.jpg

4654568-introductions.jpg

4654565-fireknivesfight01.jpg

4654569-shouldtherebemorescreaming.jpg

4654573-bettertodie.jpg

4654575-thanbekilled.jpg




Phone is gibing me trouble so I can't link more.
Very interesting choice of characters, they all could use an updated look.
couple friends' ocs. ren and naomi

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dem furries the one on the left looks badass

I tend to draw the same characters every year lol
look at this comparison from exactly 2 years ago
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finished ver.
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I wanna draw more SK girls in this style :3
 
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Argentus

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Very interesting choice of characters, they all could use an updated look.

dem furries the one on the left looks badass

I tend to draw the same characters every year lol
look at this comparison from exactly 2 years ago
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finished ver.
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I wanna draw more SK girls in this style :3
I get attached to character designs and want to do them justice. Trying to update them while keeping them recognizeable.

Like I loved Wolverines design during the Onslaught saga on the 90s so I'm basing an OC on that core design
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Thoughmy character lacks claws, wears clothe more like Leon, is MUCH larger, and has two braids in his sideburns.
 

Kodachi

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I get attached to character designs and want to do them justice. Trying to update them while keeping them recognizeable.

Like I loved Wolverines design during the Onslaught saga on the 90s so I'm basing an OC on that core design
2017738-img_0023.jpg

2017739-img_0024.jpg

2017742-img_0027.jpg

on4.jpg

Thoughmy character lacks claws, wears clothe more like Leon, is MUCH larger, and has two braids in his sideburns.
omg he looks terrifying in the 2nd and 3rd images :eek:
 

Argentus

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omg he looks terrifying in the 2nd and 3rd images :eek:
Lol right? Especially when you notice its "schlikt" instead of "snikt" like normal. Actually hear the jagged bone claws tearing the flesh when they come out as opposes to the sleek metal claws.

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Hate when cool character designs go to waste (fuck bleach and naruto)
 
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