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tokiopewpew

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I made some slighty changes, what do you think about it?

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By the way your one seems already great ;)

You changed her eyebrow? I thought a lot about how to make them and ended up trying to get some kind of a neutral face, that's why I'd drawn them as a straight line.

However, it looks really good with these changes too. I was about to ask if someone may try to improve it a bit, since I'm not really good in drawing such comic style. Those eyes drive me nuts^^

Why not build the hood around the existing Kasumi Alpha icon?

I tried it, it looked shitty imo. Kasumi alpha has also an evil eye, and I wanted to make P4's a bit more neutral, since she's not as mad as her, but I'll try it again.
 
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Matt Ponton

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In the plot "Alpha" is the codename of the cloning project of Kasumi, inevitably every clone of the girl will end to be called with the term Alpha clone: it's this the reason because the complete name of the character is "Kasumi Alpha Phase-4" but TN opted only to call it with the last part (surely for a question of lenght, but also because Kasumi Alpha is just a sort of surname for the family while what really distinguishes the clone is the "Phase-4" part).

With Phase-4 inheriting the classic red outfit of the icon of Kasumi Alpha, and with the latter being a character limited to the only DoA Dimensions and that very likely will not return ever in the series, for a practical question there wouldn't be problems to use the same icon; even so I think that being a different character Phase.4 should deserve the same treatment applied to the rest of the cast and to get a personal icon (in the end we are talking just of a little drawing).

Alpha (Phase 2) = DOA2 Kasumi
Alpha (Phase 3) = Alpha 152
Alpha (Phase 4) = DOA5 Kasumi Alpha Phase 4
 

Kronin

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You changed her eyebrow? I thought a lot about how to make them and ended up trying to get some kind of a neutral face, that's why I'd drawn them as a straight line.

However, it looks really good with these changes too. I was about to ask if someone may try to improve it a bit, since I'm not really good in drawing such comic style. Those eyes drive me nuts^^

I added the showing of the left shoulder, made more sharp the hood adjusting the basis, finally changed her eyebrown too. TN realized with Phase-4's facial expressions a really interesting (at least imo :p) mix of determination and remorse for fighting, so appear not so easy to recreate it in an icon.

Ok, well, it does not look that bad ...

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The effect appear good but I have your same thoughts about the evil eye... I tried to slighty rework on the eyebrown and the mouth, giving to the first a sad vibe and to the second a neutral one to get that mix mentioned before: what do you think?

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By the way I don't want appear a nuisance in the thread XD, even the simple icon of Kasumi Alpha with an hood is ok, I only ask to give a personal icon to Phase-4 too =)

Alpha (Phase 2) = DOA2 Kasumi
Alpha (Phase 3) = Alpha 152
Alpha (Phase 4) = DOA5 Kasumi Alpha Phase 4

Yes, you're right and summarized pretty well my usual long text XD (I ask myself what could be the Phase-1, by the way... maybe just not completely formed clones?).

However I forgot to add before that the Phase-4 of the roster has anyway a certain degree of individuality, being actually the prototype of the phase-4 clones fated to the mass production.
 
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tokiopewpew

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The effect appear good but I have your same thoughts about the evil eye... I tried to slighty rework on the eyebrown and the mouth, giving to the first a sad vibe and to the second a neutral one to get that mix mentioned before: what do you think?

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By the way I don't want appear a nuisance in the thread XD, even the simple icon of Kasumi Alpha with an hood is ok, I only ask to give a personal icon to Phase-4 too =)

That looks great, it fit's her pretty well! I also think that she should get her own icon. I'ts just irritating when you move the mouse over the icon and the name "Kasumi alpha" appears although she's called Phase 4 everywhere. Then one could also name her character forum like that.
 

Kronin

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If everyone think that my version is ok, then the icon need to be fixed making the edges of the circle more smooth (for some reasons when I open the picture of TokyoPewPew with GIMP, automatically the picture change in a such way).
 

JKT

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If everyone think that my version is ok, then the icon need to be fixed making the edges of the circle more smooth (for some reasons when I open the picture of TokyoPewPew with GIMP, automatically the picture change in a such way).
So cute ( /)u(\ )!
 

Lady Tengu

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Can we please have an actual character icon for Honoka? @CyberEvil @Mr. Wah @Brute @Rikuto
\:honoka: < This is a fucking joke Excuse my language. This is a pointless childish thing that is going to be funny for a couple more weeks. Meanwhile people who actually like Honoka cant have an actual Character icon. I Swear this thread is disappointing me.
 

Matt Ponton

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Can we please have an actual character icon for Honoka? @CyberEvil @Mr. Wah @Brute @Rikuto
\:honoka: < This is a fucking joke Excuse my language. This is a pointless childish thing that is going to be funny for a couple more weeks. Meanwhile people who actually like Honoka cant have an actual Character icon. I Swear this thread is disappointing me.
Instead of bitching about it, why aren't you submitting a better one?
 
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