I hate this game's point system in regards to ranked play. Just today I got demoted to C and lost a bonus 1000 points. It's like "I just lost my rank, and now you're going to make work extra hard just to get it back?! Have mercy, God dammit!" Losing rank is one thing, but forcing you to work...
It was a REALLY good attempt at Kamitani style. Not quite there, but I like the look of the pic regardless. She's adorable, and her expression is awesomesauce. Just pursue your own style, tbh. You've got something great going on here, so go for it.