DOA5U wanted Costumes

[Argentus]

Your initially strong and interesting design is imho getting watered down more the longer you work on it and the more cooks spoil the broth (meaning all the other forumers chiming in).
Just to name one big discrepancy: Why does she wear a visor and on top of that a baseball cap (and if you haven't changed your mind already, the blue hair?) Is she on the run as a wanted felon, to hide like that? You either wear these items for protection or for the cool-factor. For each of these aspects you just need one of the items! Less is more with design.
The low hanging baggy pants with the little glimpse of underwear were a better design choice for Mila as well...imho

I think im sticking with baggy, because it feels more tomboyish. hat was just for more detail and customization.

don't suppose you wanna take a stab at it with your far superior art skills?

 

[synce]

I have an idea for this really cool kind of cyber ninja outfit for Phase-4 but I can't draw worth shit :<

I might be able to help you out with that

 

[David Gregg]

If these are your two final designs (w/ and w/o jacket) that you are submiting I think they look fantastic!! It's edgy but stays true to Mila and imo the blue hair makes it.

Great job Argentus!

 

[Argentus]

If these are your two final designs (w/ and w/o jacket) that you are submiting I think they look fantastic!! It's edgy but stays true to Mila and imo the blue hair makes it.

Great job Argentus!

muchos danke! only two things I'm thinking of changing at this point are: adding fimgerless MMA gloves over the handwraps,, and changing the jacket letters from blue to purple.

 

[Nightpup]

I might be able to help you out with that

I would love your help.

 

[Argentus]

Is this legible?

 

[David Gregg]

Is this legible?

I would find a way to incorporate all of the details into the picture so make sure what you're presenting looks as clear as possible. Not gonna lie if I was TN and I saw this sheet with a long list of details I wouldn't read it.

 

[synce]

I would love your help.

Do you have any sketches done already or is it just in your head? Feel free to post here or PM me

 

[Kodachi]

Is this legible?

Is typing not an option? this is a bit excessive, there's unnecessary info that should already be clear on the image of your design.

 

[Argentus]

Is typing not an option? this is a bit excessive, there's unnecessary info that should already be clear on the image of your design.

not reallly. I have no computer. I tried putting the notes on the picture, but it can't be read off phone pics.

 

[David Gregg]

I say ditch the laundry list sheet. Just darken the writing on your concept sheets so that it's easier to read.

 

[Tyaren]

Don't do the text page! If there is something, that you really need to explain, put in on the outfit sheet.
A good design does not need much explanation.

 

[Rawbietussin]

I thought it was a To-Do List lol.

 

[Argentus]

Better?

 

[Tyaren]

That looks awesome!
(can you erase the pencil lines under the bold blue text though?)

Do you need help getting those two pics into one?

 

[Argentus]

That looks awesome!
(can you erase the pencil lines under the bold blue text though?)

Do you need help getting those two pics into one?

I can't, because those are printed copies for me to color in. and not yet, I need to grab my pencils out of the car, forgot to fill in coat trim and STING closeup.

 

[Argentus]

@Tyaren NOW I need help cropping them together! could you crop off the sides as well?

 

[Tyaren]

Okay, wait a sec.

 

[Tyaren]

Original:

Here I tried to correct darkness/brightness a little:

 

[Argentus]

Original:

Here I tried to correct darkness/brightness a little:

awesome thank you! now to try to submit it on facebook. and not get my hopes up because there's very little chance this will make it in game lol.