David Gregg
Well-Known Member
lol okay let me re-phrase. What I mean is if you're going to have a jacket and baggy pants it needs to really stand out with the design and colors.
DOA5U wanted Costumes
- Thread starter Dan
- Start date
lol okay let me re-phrase. What I mean is if you're going to have a jacket and baggy pants it needs to really stand out with the design and colors.
Argentus
Well-Known Member
as requested, crop jacket and skinny jeans version...I threw the cap on too to test it. for the pants, I think ill shred one of the knees and fray the edges. wasn't supposed to be future, so much as just a cooler color palette, as opposed to her usual warmer colors.A cropped jacket might be good. Also imo when you finalize the details and color make sure it really stands out. It needs to be flashy (you're going for a more futuristic blue-haired badass fighter right?) so don't hold back and make it look simple just b/c it's Mila (btw I don't think it looks simple. Maybe add something to the pants though). There are already some Mila designs out there that are grabbing my attention but I think you have a concept that can win just make sure you overdo it (as long as it all comes together) with the design.
Rawbietussin
Well-Known Member
It looks much better I think.
David Gregg
Well-Known Member
as requested, crop jacket and skinny jeans version...I threw the cap on too to test it. for the pants, I think ill shred one of the knees and fray the edges. wasn't supposed to be future, so much as just a cooler color palette, as opposed to her usual warmer colors.
Okay I like this a lot more!!! Add in her dark blue-ice blue hair and cool colors to the outfit and this will look bad ass.
Rawbietussin
Well-Known Member
I bet you're missing the exposed panties now, Argentus.
Argentus
Well-Known Member
wasn't it you who preferred the black and blue hair? I'm kinda concerned with her looking too thin with the jacket toggled off, though...maybe crop jacket with baggy jeans?Okay I like this a lot more!!! Add in her dark blue-ice blue hair and cool colors to the outfit and this will look bad ass.
I am, but these jeans are lowrise, so I could just have non lowrise panties underneath. but it doesn't look as good. I liked the asymmetry of it with the baggy jeans. tthough I have thought about being able to switch the sports bra top with regular bras like a regular underwear customization...but regular bras actually have a different shape than the sports bra.
David Gregg
Well-Known Member
I do. I just assumed you were sticking with the ice-dark blue route since you said you preferred it. And trust me anything that shows off Mila's derriere will get extra points from TN.
Rawbietussin
Well-Known Member
Maybe you can incorporate something from Miguel's TTT2 default by exposing the garter part of the underwear if it's something you can't live without. It's kinda like how some guys wear their underwear with their pants by letting the brand name/logo (like Calvin Klein) exposed. xD
Argentus
Well-Known Member
like this?
David Gregg
Well-Known Member
like this?also look at the lower legs. I drew it with both tight and loose/baggy lower legs of the pants for comparison. yaknow, skinny jeans above the knees, baggy jeans below the knees? wwaddya think?
lol yup those pants show off the back department. I would stick with the skinny jeans from waist to ankle but if you have your heart set on it being baggy then who am I to stop you?
Rawbietussin
Well-Known Member
Why not try rolling the pants up if you're going for baggy? Or why not try slim jeans (upper part is skinny while lower part is loose)?
Argentus
Well-Known Member
not sure what thats directed at.
Argentus
Well-Known Member
ehhhh the more i look at it, the more I'm just seeing Hitomis c1. that's the issue I had with trying this.lol yup those pants show off the back department. I would stick with the skinny jeans from waist to ankle but if you have your heart set on it being baggy then who am I to stop you?
Squizzo
Well-Known Member
I personally prefer the baggy pants version, with the exposed panties, full length jacket and no cap. It had a more casual tomboyish vibe that fits Mila well.as requested, crop jacket and skinny jeans version...I threw the cap on too to test it. for the pants, I think ill shred one of the knees and fray the edges. wasn't supposed to be future, so much as just a cooler color palette, as opposed to her usual warmer colors.
Rawbietussin
Well-Known Member
Best to save the idea for now, I doubt TN is accepting P4 entries simply because she wasn't offered yet for 5U. There was entry for her but TN rejected it.
Kronin
Well-Known Member
Actually it's still not sure if the entry for Phase-4 will be rejected or less...
Argentus
Well-Known Member
yeah...I definitely see the appeal of the tighter version, but its more Hitomi than Mila (identical to Hitomis C1).
Your initially strong and interesting design is imho getting watered down more the longer you work on it and the more cooks spoil the broth (meaning all the other forumers chiming in).
Just to name one big discrepancy: Why does she wear a visor and on top of that a baseball cap (and if you haven't changed your mind already, the blue hair?) Is she on the run as a wanted felon, to hide like that? You either wear these items for protection or for the cool-factor. For each of these aspects you just need one of the items! Less is more with design.
The low hanging baggy pants with the little glimpse of underwear were a better design choice for Mila as well...imho